Castle of Glass is obviously connected to Alula Falling, but how does/will The Shovel and everything before it have ties to Clear Moon (assuming Clear Moon/Death (the 8-bit skull entity)/The Bridge are the primary things in Universe .08 unless this timeline is just a collection of almost everything you did since DD 1)? Aside from Oh Chapel possibly being connected to the Clear Moon cult and The Shovel potentially being connected to how the Moon King came into being, those things seem a bit too random to be connected to Dead Detention (DD) and the like, especially Polaroids, which feels like it came out of nowhere and has very minimal meaning.
As for Chaos Eclipse:
1. If it's going to be a direct sequel, I'd hope it would be as close to when Chaos Girl ends as possible, before the DD 1 after story. Why? Because hell was as good as literally unleashed on Tokyo in the process! So many questions: How much damage did Tokyo suffer? Did it recover from all that damage in the 9ish months before chronicle bulletin (it must have repaired at least most of the damage by late December)? How many Chaos Children were at Zone Zero (I'd assume there were hundreds)? How many of them got their chaos chips removed other than Tom (assuming he had one too) and Stella? Did the Japanese military or at least government respond to the armageddon children's rampage at any point (it would be completely ridiculous if the answer's "no, not at all")? What's the Japanese government's stance towards Clear Moon?
2. As far as I can tell, assuming ending 1 of Chaos Girl ep.3 is the canon end of Chaos Girl (pretty sure it is), Shia's fate seems to be quite a ways up there prior to DD 2, especially since you don't even run into him if play Chaos Girl with the canon choices. Is he going to show up in Chaos Eclipse? Did he have a chaos chip put in him? I guess I'll have to settle with waiting to find out.
2.5. Also worth noting on ending 1 of episode 3 is that the nameable character (giving him a name like you did with Stella might be nice) is still alive. What happened to him? Did Clear Moon get to him? Did life go back to normal for him at all? Will he be the player character in Chaos Eclipse too?
3. How exactly did Stella get a chip attached to her heart removed with the only thing left behind being a scar on her left arm? [possibly freaky stuff warning] Was a specially designed surgical tool that went to the heart starting from the left arm required to remove the chip?
3.5. While I'm talking about Stella, I'd like to bring up that not a lot of her story was told. All I know for sure is that she hid from Clear Moon for a fair amount of time and must have ran into them at some point, otherwise she'd (supposedly) never have a chaos chip.
4. I wonder how dark Chaos Eclipse might get. It could be interesting to have early end-of-the-line scenarios where you get a very bad, non-canon ending if you make certain choices.
Couple other things:
1. We didn't see much of R.E.D. so far aside from detective freeman showing up in Chronicle Bulletin ep. 6 and part of DD 2. Are there other members of R.E.D.? Do they have an ultimate goal and/or are part of or allies with some faction dedicated to opposing Clear Moon? How much more of R.E.D. will we see in Universe .08?
2. What's up with almost everyone who's not a clear soldier not having a gun? The only guy not a clear soldier in all of Universe .08 (The Cloud aside) who ever had a gun is Ash from episode 1 of Chaos Girl. I'd think since the magic in this universe has to be charged up before it can be cast most of the time that more folks delving into the darkness might have guns.
Finally, I remember you saying originally that Chaos Eclipse would be a trilogy and more recently said you'd prefer to make it all one entry. User wise, that means either getting chunks of the story every now and then, having to wait for the next chunk of story until the the finale or getting the whole thing all at once, potentially with more polish/cohesion but having to wait longer to get anything. I'd like to say I'm fine with how you go at it either way. Go with whatever method you want to work with.
firepuppy247
Holy shit I wasn't expecting the games from 1960-2008 to be on the timeline. I didn't think they were a part of Universe 08. That's awesome!